Tatyana+perkins+admission+essay

===As an __administration__ officer I have my own Ranking of TEARS. I feel that Roman's Recommendations are very important because I need to know about the student that is coming to this College. I also want to add that I want to get to know a little about any __students__ before __meeting__ them. I also want them to get to know me as well so it doesn't seem as if we are just __complete__ strangers. I feel that the SENIOR ACTIVITY SHEET is second important. Its Second important because I want to know if the __students__ we are gonna have like to do activities and not go home and chill with their friends after school. I deffenitly want kids that are __active__ and like to do fun activities on their __free__ time. The third thing that is very important is The essay. I want to know how He/she likes to do and i obviously want to get to know about them from person to person. Not only from other people. I would also like to add that i would even want them to reach out and say well i'm not so strong in Math or any other acedemics they struggle in. Then we know what we can __work__ on them with. Its embarrasing to tell someone you need __help with__ something in .front of a lot of people. This essay helps a lot because only I & teachers will know about it, not everyone else. I Feel that the transcript is forth important because I want to know this __students__ attendance and grades are in school. I want to know if they show up on time or lateness/absences look like. We don't want someone that's gonna show up twice a month. we really want to see less that 5 lateness/absences in the transcript. Finally I Personally feel that the SAT'S are really not fair and Bias because there are __thousands__ of kids who don't know any english but want to come to new york and take these test. I know that must be a great oppertunity for other people from other countries to take SAT'S, but they can't take it because its all in English. I Just feel that is very unfair and it's not right. I Wouldn't even look at the SAT'S Because its unfair to everybody. Noone should have to take a test 1 time just to get into a college. Its very ridiculous to me and unnecessary.===

===In reviewing Roman Polanco's application. Roman's transcript started off very rough. His average was 65-75. Not bad for a freshman but could have done better. His lateness/absence was absolutely terrible. Freshman year he had 42 l lateness and 25 absences. That's terrible for Freshaman year. Sophomore year for Panlanco wasn't as bad. He __picked__ up alot on his grades and his attendance and lateness got a whole lot better than freshman year. Junior year he droped his grades just by a little bit not a lot, but his atendance and lateness got a little bad. Senior year he picked up his grades by a lot. All 80's and 90's. That's what we like to see. Roman's Essay was very interesting. From the __start__ of Roman's essay I can already tell what kind of student he is. So far Roman seems like a lazy person. He can __apply__ himself to do better but he's a lazy kid. I understand though. I actually love the fact that he started off with "Sunday morning" instead of a school day. I would like knowing what he does on his __free__ time and not only in school. The essay was amazing I really enjoyed __learning__ more about Roman and a little bit of his life outside of school. Roman's Recommendation letter was absolutly amazing! I loved the fact that his teacher Art Samuels got straight to Roman's Activities. I love how he was a strong leader. We love leaders. I also love that he did activities and didn't just sit around and do nothing. I love what that he's active. Last but not least Roman's SAT'S were good. We don't really look at SAT'S. I think they are very Bias and Unnecessary.===

===The second person I wanna talk about William Santos. His Transcript was bad the first 3 years of high school. 12th Grade he picked up by a lot. His attendance got worst every year. William's Essay wasn't the best. He didnt tell me anything about him self. I don't even know what he likes to do in school or his personal life. His essay wasn't good at all. As for his recommendation letter his teacher was being more than nice. From what Iv'e seen on his Transcript to his recommendation letter really doesnt surprise me. What his teacher was saying was very thoughtful but not all true in my point of view. Also for his activity he didn't do much activity. Since I don't know much about William it seems as if he didn't take school serious. My team and I are very serious when it comes to students and their work. Finally His SAT'S were amazing! I wonder why he did better in his SAT'S but his grades weren't all that good.===

===The Third person I would like to talk about is Jasmine Duke. Jasmine's Transcript wasn't as good for the first 3 years of high school. 12th grade she picked up and did excellent. Jasmine's essay wasn't the best. She talked a lot about her mom, not so much about her. Her essay was about her mom. I wish she could have talked more about herself then her mom. I don't know to much about her now. Jasmine's activity sheet is looking good. She didn't find any clubs or was a leader to one. At least she joined clubs for all 4 years. Jasmine's Recommendation was great. Her teacher Art samuels let me know everything she did. She is a strong student and an extremely hard-working student to their community. Art told us she is a great student. Her teachers and peers respect her and admire what they do. Jasmine's family are immigrants but she does let that effect her. Jasmine's SAT'S scores where great. She passed with flying colors.===

===The last person I would like to talk about is Kaylah Serrano. All 4 of of her high school years were perfect. She was never absent. She only had one lateness out of 4 years! Kaylah's Essay was very impressive. She started from the summer after her 8th grade year. She talked about her summer then straight to school. From what Iv'e learned so far is that she is strong. She also has provided for her family and still stayed in school. That impressed me most out of her essay. She is a very bright girl. She didn't let anything get into her way when it came to school. What impressed me about it is when she said " I am a strong independent woman who cannot wait to take the next step in life" That still impresses me. I absolutly loved her essay. Kaylah's activity sheet looks perfect. I love the fact she is a leader of some activities. We love leaders. I also love that she has done more than one activity, shows me she is a active person. Her recommendation from her teacher Art was remarkable! I don't think Iv'e read anything like that. The letter was so beautiful. Every thing written in that letter touched me so much. I felt as if I was with Art writing this recommendation about Jasmine. She doesn't only impress me but her teachers and peers to. Jasmine's SAT'S scores were perfect! I really don't have much to say about her SAT'S. They where great. She passed with flying colors.===

===As an conclusion, I have read all 4 students TEARS. In my opinion I would have chose all 4 students because they are all strong and built for this school. Unfortunatly we can only make one desecion. The person I chose Is Kaylah Sarreno. I chose Kaylah because her TEARS where great. I'm not picking her because her TEARS where the best but I chose her because she is a strong leader. She can be the new light to our college. Kaylah can bring more than just leadership to our school, but independence. She is great for our school. She has really earned. She is bright,positive,strong, thoughtful, all the positive things I can think of. Kaylah can even bring something new to our college. We are more than happy to have her and we are accepting Kaylah Sarreno to this college, I really hope she likes it.===