Cecile+Figueroa+Admissions+Essay


 * As an admissions officer I rank the TEARS in this order. The component of the TEARS that is most important to me is the Essay. This is tells me about that person and who they really are. The activities tell me what they did in the past and weather they had a job or not or if they got paid how much they got paid in an hour minute or seconds. The transcript tell me bout they grades and the attendance/lateness and if they have an upward or not.**


 * In reviewing William Santos application, I saw that in his transcript he had an okay grade he had a lot of lateness and absent. He had mostly all 65 and 70s he really can do better and work on his lateness n absent. He’s recommendation is nothing about his life is mostly about him saying about his grades and saying how he will do well when he get to college and he state that the work in high school is boring and that he knows mostly know everything and have not been challenging. His S.A.T.S is pretty good he got 80s and 90s on his testes. His essay is spaghetti sauces he rushes throw it.**


 * In reviewing Roman Polanco`s application, I saw that he did an okay job but he could of did better he had mostly 65s 70s and also 80s. And he had a lot of absents and had a loss of lateness he need to work on it he need to start coming early to school and coming to school period so he can get higher grades. He’s essay was okay it wasn`t a spaghetti sauce essay. His S.A.T.S is pretty good but he can do a lot better.**


 * In reviewing Kaylah Serrano`s application, I saw that she had good grades and also never been absent once only once in the 12th grade but other than that she had an great job. She was never absent or late only once in 10th grade. Her recommendation is mostly about her she tells you a little about everything in her life that she would think that her counselor would care bout and would think that they would care about. Her essay is about her and telling you about her life. Her S.A.T.S is pretty good I guess but she could have done better.**


 * In reviewing jasmine duke`s application, I saw that her grades are excellent she was never late in the 9th grade but she also had 3 lateness in and she had 4 absent in 11th grade and had 1 lateness and had 3 absents in the 10th grade she had 3 absents and no lateness in the 12th grade. Her S.A.T.S is okay but she could of did a lot better she needs to work on it and she could of studied the night before.**


 * In conclusion, I feel that they all could have done better and also tried a lot better and harder they essay need to more bout then and not about other people. After comparing all of the candidates to think that they all could of did better but I think Kaylah Serrano did the best out of all of them because she put more details on it.**