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As an admission officer at a college I always look for a well detailed essay.I also look for a good transcript because grades also matter alot to me and an upward trends and a reason why the upward trend.Then I look for a great recommendation letter to see how the teachers/college counselor what did student had done and what they think about it.Also I like to see what the student does inside and outside of school like having a job and being in the basket ball team.The last thing i care about the application is the Sats score because I know some kids are not the best at taking test.

The first application I saw was form Roman polcano .Romans essay had a great hook for me and it got me to read the essay to the very end.I wasn't really happy when i saw Ramon grades for his fist year pf high school but he brought it up by the last year of high school.Also roman had an upward trend which really got my attention. In the recommendation the counselor it explained to me why his grades were not the best and there was faint praise in the letter.The activities that Ramon have was being the school embosser.Also he volunteer at a soup kitchen.Roman sats scores were below average but i really do not care about the sats that much that i would not a student in because of that.

The second application that i had saw was Jasmine duke. Jasmine essay did not really answer the real question i was mostly talking about her mother.Jasmines transcript was really good all for years but i wish that she took more challenging classes or honor class.In jasmine.Also Jasmine rarely came late or absence. Recommendation it told what how much of a hard worker Jasmine actually was and told explain to me that she had class at college.Jasmine activities had me because she helped around her community and also has some part time jobs.Jasmine sat scores were not the best but i can tell she is not the best test taker in the world.

The third application that I saw was William Santos.William essay did not answer the real answer he basically made an excuse that had had bad grades.Also his essay only had one paragraph which to me it seems that he made his essay at the last minute.Williams transcript was ok because it seem that he did not really try in the first to years of high school.Also he rarely came to school at all though all the whole school year.In William recommendation it seem that he had gotten faint praise from the counselor.Also the counselor only wrote three sentences for the letter.William was really all over the place in his activities because he went to a new club every year.Expect for his last year he actually found a club for the last year of high school.William SATs score were above average because william barley came to school yet he did well on all his tests.

The last application i saw was Kayla Serrano. Kayla's essay was great because it had answer the real question.Also Kayla's essay also had an epiphany which really got my attention.Kayla transcript show that she really likes school because he was only absence once out of all 4 years of high school.Also Kayla actually got in honor Spanish which show how hard she works in some of her class and also shows that she wants to gat a challenging in her classes.Kayla recommendation really got me because it told me how hard Kayla works in school and outside of school.It also showed me how responsible she actually is.Kayla has some interesting jobs because she works 20 hours a week.Then in the first two years of high school she walk her little bother to school.Some of Kayla SATs were average expect for critical reading and writing.

Out of all four candidates i would choose Kayla because she really show me how hard she worked.Even when she was a new student it did not stop her from getting good grades.She also showed me how much respectability she can handle.I would be proud to have her as a student in my college. Antonio Marrero persuasive essay