Jayna+Admissions+Essay

As an admission officer, i ranked the tears in this order. first is the transcript because i want to know what grades they got in the beginning of the year up until 12 grade. second is the essay because ill know what they are like and what the been through in life and how good they are. third is recommendation ill know what the teacher is saying about them and how well they do. fourth is activity because college love leaders and what jobs what they worked at. last but not least is SAT's. i dont really care about there sat but they need to have a really good score. that's how i will ranked the tears. when i saw William Santos application, i saw how low his grades were in freshmen year all the way up to to junior year. but i was most impressed with William in 12 grade. he really stepped it up. William's essay was bad it did not tell us anything about him or what he was like in school and outside of school. he took some programs like comic maganize about some super hero named super innovator. he was a founder for that club. he also took film appreciation. he was a member there. for his home activity he took care of the family dog clean,walk,and feed after the dog. and his work experience he work at fanta's hardware. he was a stock boy. he works 12 hrs. he also work at the amc. he was a ticket salesperson. work 18 hrs during the school and 35 in the summer. he had alot of breadth over depth. his sat scores were ok. While looking at jasmine's transcript i saw her grades it was very good she had a couple 80's and 90's. her attendance was ok. one thing that i notice in sophmore she was late one time and absence 3 time. other then she did pretty good senior year no lateness only been abence 3.jasmine essay was not good. it dident tell us anything about her it only tells us about her mother and how she works for long hours and take care of her 2 children. jasmine work experince was good. she starded in the step club and she was a member there. she was from 9-12. she was also in the drama club for all four years as well. she was also in the church choir and work at Lawrence and darby jett. she was a babysitter. her sat scores was very low i was very disappointing at her sat. her recommendation was ok. it it talk about being a member of innovation's first class. looking at Kayla Serrano grades was ok. she had couple 70's and 80's. she had good grades in math and Spanish. she took some honor classes as well. her reagents scores was very good. i really like her essay it really talk about how it was like moving to new york from another country. her recommendation letter was ok. it talk how a good kid she is and she had allot of pride in her. i was not impressed with her activities. she diden't do allot over the summer. she not a good leader. her SAT's score was not good. i think she could have did better. her math sat is ok. but cr and w was not ok. In reviewing Roman Polanco's application, i saw how his grades it was ok. he had a low grades in in freshmen year but step it up in all three of the years. his attendance and lateness was not good. it was bad in freshmen year, but ok in senior year. roman essay was good. it talk about how he was in central park and how he did a breast cancer awareness walk for many. it had a hook to it as well. it had know spelling and grammar to it. his recommendation was good it talk about how a good leader he was and a trustworthy person he was to. his activity was good. he was a student ambassadors for all years. he was a member in 9- 10th grade. and a leader in 12th grade. lats is his sat. his sat was low i thought he could have did better After comparing all the candidates i think ill will choose roman planco even if his sat scores was not all that good. i think i will choose him.