Ruby+Quinones+Admissions+Essay

As an admissions officer i would rank transcripts 1st because they tell me what kind of student he/she is from freshman year to senior year. i would rank the essay next because to me the essay is the most important part in a college application. The reason why the essay is most important part in a college application is because you get to know more about the student that might come to your college and maybe get a clue of how they act in school or what they like to do for fun. Next i would rank activities. i would rank activities because as a person i would like to get to know who they are before meeting them in person, i would like to know what they do for a living, if they work, if there into any sports,etc. after that i would rank recommendation. i would rank recommendation because the recommendation is the seconds most important part in a college application, it tells you about how he/she does in class, how well there grades were throughout the years in high school, and how there SAT scores came out to be. finally i would rank SAT scores last. the reason why i would rank SAT scores last it because to me i don't think its necessary to have SAT's when you have all these other test to take and that would be just another test which means extra stress and i don't think people need that.

In reviewing reviewing Kayla Serrano transcript, i looked over her transcript and it wasn't terrible but it wasn't all that good either. her freshmen year she had seen to have gotten mostly 70's through 90's throughout her 1st year in high school, i think that's an average grade for her first year. the good thing was that she was never absent or late, and she earned all her credits which is a really good thing because college doesn't want a student that's always late or absent. her next year she made a big improvement in her grade's. her grades went from 70's to 80's which is pretty good but she can still do better. her 10th grade year she was absent once which is probably because she was sick. the next following years her grades stayed in the 80's through 90's which its good she was never absent or late, she earned all of her credits that she needed to pass. the next thing i am going to rank in Kayla Serrano recommendation is her essay. when i was reading her essay i noticed how she made a mistake in the first paragraph. if there was no mistake it would've have been perfect because she told a story from her life that was obviously important to her. she was talking about some deep stuff in her story which i appreciated. the next thing i would rank is her activities. in 9th grade she was in a club called the jamming cares club she probably didn't seem to like it because 10th grade 11th grade and 12th grade she didnt continue with the program. another activity she did was walking her younger brother to school each morning. she continued that program for 2 years, im assuming by 11th grade her brother was old enough to walk to school by himself. now im going to rank her counselors recommendation. Kayla Serrano's councesler said nothing but great things about her. she mentioned how kayla takes risks and challenge's herself when it comes to higher level courses.

in reviewing Roman Polanco's recomindation im going to rank his transcript first. throughout his years in high school his best year was in 12th grade. 9th grade through 11th grade he stould with 60's and 80's which isnt that bad but it isn't perfect like i would expect he would want his grades to be. Romanwas absent and late alot of times. his first year he was absent 25 times and late 42 times. his second year 10th grade he was absent 15 times and late 33 times. his 11th grade year he was absent 10 times and late 22 times his last year 12th grade, he was absent 5 times and late 12 times. as you can see the number of absencise and latenesses have gone down in the beggining he was late and absent alot but if you check his last year he was absent half the times as he was before and late half the times before. next i am going to rank his esssay. Romans essay was very good. it was very long and hard written. i could tell he took his time into writing this essay. i like how at the end he put how he thinks he changed throught his life, he also talks about how he helped other people in his life. after that i am going to rank his activities. roman was all together in 4 activities in high school. one of those activities was adjude mel portuguese club with esther, he didnt seem to like it because he was only in it for one year. he was also in innovation club he also didnt seem to like that club because he was in it for one year. he voluntered in the soup kitchen and central park clean up which we like at college. the next thing i am going to rank is her counselors recommindation. his counseler said roman works very hard in his work and how he realized many things about the changes in his life. he had many advantages of opportunities offered to him.

In reviewing william santos recommindation i am going to rank his transcripts first