Davontay+wigfall+admission+essay

As an admission officer I ranked my tears as transcript first because grades are the most important things you need to master.

Activities is another thing I would rank so people can know what you do in life.

S.A.T is another thing I would rank so schools can know what you are great at and what you need to work on.

I would rank the essay because you can tell people about yourself.

Recommendation letter can tell me about how the student is in the classroom.

In reviewing Kaylah's application I noticed that every year kaylah grades started to get higher she started with 70s and as the years went on she started to get 80s and 90s.I also noticed that she had very good attendence kaylah only had 1 absence when she was in 10th grade.Kaylah essay was great she had a great hook and also some spelling and grammar she also gave a lot of details on her essay.Kaylah work 20 hour a week from 9th to 10th grade her job was a home activitie.kaylah gave me a lot of details on her recommendation.But kayla s.a.t scores wasn't so good.

In reviewing jasmine application I noticed that she passed all her class with 80s and 90s.Another thing i noticed is that jasmine have good attendence.Jasmine essay was not so good jasmine essay was about her mother.Jasmine was apart of the drama club in her school she also work 10hours a week doing home activities.I notice that jasmine take a extra science and technology program on her recommendation.The only thing was that jasmine s.a.t scores wasn't so good.

Reviewing williams santos application I noticed that he have poor attendence williams grades was also bad from 9th grade to 11th grade but one good thing I noticed of william is that he started to do great in 12th grade passing with 80s and 90s.Williams essay is to short he's not giving me any details about himself.His recommendation doesn't describe his strength or weekness.williams recommendation says that he's smart but lazy.Williams s.a.t scores was above average in all three subjects more then 100 points above average.

Reviewing roman polanco's application I noticed that he started to do better every year.romans essay was great he has a hook also an epiphany and he told so important details about himself and what he do in life.