MICHAEL+REID+ADMISSION+ESSAY

==**// A //**s an admission officer i ranked the tears, In a certain order **__//R//____ecommendation__** is first because this will tell you off the back if the child/student is a good child ....good grades is one thing but a bad child with good grades is another situation .__//**A**//**CTIVITY**__ is the second one because it shows how active the child is .you would not want some one that's lazy because most of his/her work wont. **//__Transcript__//** is the third because of a couple of reasons one main reason is because if the student pass the first two it would show that his grades are good, its obvious ....if the teachers like him/her and he/she is active he/she has good grades in all schools you should have good grades in order to stay on a team .so there for i believe this should be third.**//__E__//__ssay__** is forth because you would like to know how that student is and if the student gets good grades,active and teachers love the student then there should be a fun time on reading the students essay.//**__S.__**//**__a.t.s.__** is dead last its just a one day test that could mess up your application analysis sheet.== = My first candidate is WILLIAM SANTOS I would pick him for a lot of reasons .first reason was because most of his student info is on a upward trend witch is very good. He picked up his grades ,He picked up his additude because most of his teachers like him.The bad part is he did not push himself on more challenging classes. He really didn't do that much but clean up in his house over the summer. The teachers seemed to like him in his recommendation.On his sats his did very well .Also his essay was very weak and just talked about his grades. = = William Santos is do ok and slighty above average. = = = = My second candidate is jasmine because she didn't challenged her self but has problems taking test which is OK but she just needs to work on it .The teachers love her she did a lot of activitys over the summer.Her regents were above average.Her grades are excellent .Her essay is a little to short also it is a spaghetti sauce, And it does not talk about her.she needs to put more work in her essay =

=SHE IS ON AVERAGE=

= My third candidate is roman Polanco I choose him because he was also on a upward trend nut his was more out standing.His regents was also good but he seemed to mess up on the s.a.t.s. but that's not a giant problem. His teachers are very proud to talk about him .His activity are very good and for his essay he challenged him self in his essay witch is awesome when he was motivated enough to do the breast cancer awareness walk. =

=HE IS ON AVERAGE=

= My last and final candidate is Kaylah Serrano now looking over her transcript again it starting to make me change my mind to pick her as my top number one candidate. She has good grade .Excellent attendance she was only absent one time ,that's very outstanding because this trend script is out of four years so the means she was absent one time out of four years. Her test scores is slightly under average ,on her S.A.T. she did OK but can do a lot better on her regents the same thing .She does not do allot of activity except walk her little brother to school. Her essay is OK but could be shorter .The teacher loves her and his pride on talking about her. =

= SHE IS ABOVE AVERAGE =

= The candidate i pick is Kaylah Serrano because almost all of her stuff is excellent I like her and i'm sure her teachers are in love with her. She doesn't do a lot of activity's at home or at school. =