Manny+DeJesus+Admissions+Essay

manny dejesus

As an admission officer I have ranked T.E.A.R.S in this order. T.R.S.A.E.The reason why I have changed it into this particular order is because the transcript is what any body would check up on because of the amount of latenesses/absences,grades or the score on your regents exam. for recomendation I chose it because the recomendation is a letter from your counselar or teachers showing and telling you about that certain student and about their responsibilities and grades and what the teachers or counselars think about the student on whether they should get an oppurtunity for a job or applying to a college.for s.a.t's i chose that for third because you can see what they don't and do know. not only that, that certain student can do it again if they think they didn't do so well on their s.a.t's. Activities is 4th because of the jobs,volunteering ,home chores,ect. for fifth I've chosen essay because its showing who you really are and what type of school you are looking for what do you do for jobs and volunteer and other things schools be looking for.

in reveiwing kaylah serranos i noticed that her application, i have noticed that her transcript is very well done through out her high school years. her transcript is also very well done. her grades are not only passing it is above 70's, 80's and 90's from 9th to 12 grade. she took advance classes and has passed all of them. she has had an upward trend, she has also passed her regents with a high score for all classes with high 60's, 70's, 80's and 90's. her s.a.t.s is an average of 400's 500's and a 300. she has not have been absent for her whole high school years. she has only been absent once through out her high school years in 10th grade. her essay has showed many things in her life time from going to one country to another and her grammer and spelling is very well written. all of her work has been put in one essay and has been perfectly shown.

in reveiwing roman palancos i have noticed his transcript and during his 9th grade he has been passing but not more above with 65's and 70's in his grades during 9th grade. he has been un responsible with his attendence and latenesses. he has been late and absent for more than 20 to forty times during most of his high school year. on the other hand his essay has been successfully shown but has not been exactly 500 hundred words.