Jeremy+Nunez+admission+essay

As an admissions officer I ranked the TEARS in this order. The most important for me is the ESSAY because that is were they going to get to learn stuff about you and see what you did in high school. The second most important to me is the RECOMMENDATION letter because they will see what teachers thinking about and see if you did work and how many time you got late and absent and behavior. The third most important to me is ACTIVITIES because the colleges that you apply to want to see what you did on your alone time in or outside of school. The fourth most important to me is the TRANSCRIPT because it shows your grades, regents score, and your strength and weakness. The least important to me is S.A.T.s because you could had done bad in that test but in every other thing I'm doing really good and they wouldn't care what you got.

In reviewing Kaylah Serrano application, I saw that she was doing really good in everything. In the TRANSCRIPT I will give her a 4.5 because her grades are very good, she got great math and science grades and her attendance is great. In Kaylah ESSAY I will give her a 4.5 because she got a wonderful, fantastic hook and it shows that she put a lot of time and effort put into this essay. In the ACTIVITIES I will give her a 2.5 because she did very little in four years and didn't participate that much. In the RECOMMENDATION I will give it a 5 because it told me a lot about her and it explained details why her grades were what they are. In the S.A.T.s I will give it a 3.5 because I would had liked to have seen a higher math grade.

In reviewing William Santos application, I saw that his strength is global and u.s history. In the TRANSCRIPT I will give it a 2 because his attendance is horrible, just passing, and regents are high. In the ESSAY I give it a 1.5 because it look like he wrote it in like 10 minutes, didn't put no time into it. In the ACTIVITIES I will give it a 4 because he participated in clubs, programs, sports and he worked in 11Th grade as a stock boy in Fanta's hardware for 12 hours and in 12Th grade he worked as a ticket salesperson at AMC movie theater, at union square. In the RECOMMENDATION letter I give it a 1.5 because it only talked about his SAT but it didn't tell me how he act in school and tell me what she think about him when he in school. In the S.A.T.s I will grade it a 4.5 because he did more than what I expected he did out standing on it.

In reviewing Jasmine Duke application, I saw that she was doing good in school. In the TRANSCRIPT I will give it 3.5 because her grades for classes was 80 and above, she got late 1 and 12 absent in 4 years, and on her regents she got 73 and above but I feel that if she was late once and absent only 12 times in 4 years she should had have gotten a better grade in the regents. In the ESSAY I give it a 1 because all she did was talk about her mother life she didn't talk about herself so I didn't get to know stuff about her. In the ACTIVITIES I will give it a 4 because she participated in the knitting club, drama club, a scripture reader in 11th and 12th grade for the church and in 10th grade she worked as a babysitter for Lawrence and Darby Jett and a junior tour guide. In the RECOMMENDATION letter I will give it a 4.5 because it told me a lot about Jasmine, how she act inside and outside of school and it told me how on she go to Saturday school for math and science technology program at Baruch College. In the S.A.T.s I will grade her a 2 because she didn't pass none of them and she went to Saturday school and still didn't pass.

In reviewing Roman Polanco application, I saw that he was doing okay. I will grade the TRANSCRIPT a 2.5 because his grades were average but he did really good on the regents but his attendance was not that good. I will grade the ESSAY a 5 because it showed that he put time into the essay and I learned about his four years in high school and about his life. I will grade the ACTIVITIES a 5 because he participated in a lot of clubs and extra credits classes and he worked as a busboy,cashier, waiter at Julio Franco's El Ricon restaurant and taco shop. I will grade the RECOMMENDATION letter a 5 because it told about what he do in school and how he is accomplishing his goals. I will grade the S.A.T.s a 3 because he did good on it but I would had have expected him to do better.

In conclusion I will choose Kaylah Serrano because even if she didn't do that good on the S.A.T.s she still was doing really good in her classes. The reason why I will choose Kaylah Serrano is because she had a perfect attendance in four years. The reason why I will choose Kaylah Serrano is because even if she didn't do that much activities it was because she was working at Dunkin Donuts to help her family pay the rent and food to feed the kids and them.