Jasmine+Persuasive+Essay

The first reason I am in favor of metal detectors in school is because schools wouldn't know
==if students are bringing ion weapons and drugs.[|One evidence I found is one study shows that] [|metal detectors are used to a decrease that student carry weapons in school most likely 7.8%] [|vs 13.8%] .My evidence is that I think metal detectors will keep schools safer if because it would keep students from bringing in weapons and drugs.==

detectors can make schools safer for kids to not get hurt.[|one evidence I found was that in 1992,]
==[|they discovered that the number of students bringing weapons to school is more than half in just one year and violent crimes dropped by 35 percent.]My evidence shows that the schools and the community will be safe if they have metal detectors from keeping weapons and drugs from hurting people.==

[|during an ensuing manual search,most people try hiding metal objects located on their]
==[|body parts and its usually more than one weapon.]My evidence shows that without metal detectors,most people would get away with bringing a weapon in school or any other place that have metal detectors.==