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As an admision officer, I ranked the TEARS in order of transcript, SAT, recommendation,essay, and activities. The reason I put them in this order was because I put them as the ones that were more important to me and how I think it would be for colleges. TEARS stands for five different definitions like t stands for transcript, e stands for essay, a stands for activities, r stands for recommendation, and s stands for S.A.T. TEARS that is important because as you go on in life, colleges look at these components to see how you will fair as a student at their university.

In reviewing Roman Polanco's application, I saw that his grades were passing grades but they are not grades a college would like. The essay was outstanding because it had everything an essay should have. For example, he explained himself very well and even elaborated on important details. Something I disliked about Roman was that he had a issues with his attendance. I was impressed with the fact that Roman was a student ambassador for 4 years. He was a leader and leaders are something that colleges like. One thing that I notice about his transcript and SAT's are not bad, but are average.The epiphany was that he learned he could inpired people.

In reviewing William Santos, I saw that he has passing grades, although not perfect grades. His essay was not good at all. He had no questions no hook no epiphany and he did not show he has gowned. I dislike that he was breath at his activities and his attendance. his recomendation was not all that. But wat I was impressed and loved was his s.a.t was very perfect, I really liked that. while looking at his transcrip I noticed he had a huge problem with his attendance and thought the year it dint change at all.

In reviewing Jasmine Duke I saw that his grades were very good his attendance was not bad at all. Jasmines essay was not good at all because all she did was talk about her mom and she does not any specific details about her self. I loved her recommendation showed alot about her and how excellent student she is. Although I dint like that her essay was about her mom everything would have been good if she would have took that time and talk about herself. Jasmine Duke has very good grades but her essay was not good at all.

In reviewing Kayla Serrano I saw that in her transcript and her grades were vnot perfect but good. Kayla essay was outstanding it has everything a essay should have it had a hook, a epiphany, questions, specific detailed and with the detailed she gave it has definatly showed that she has grown up. I disliked that Kayla was breath at her activities and she was not a leader. I was most impressed with her essay. one thing I noticed that also impressed me was her attendance it was amaixing she was absent only once during the entire yea and not once she was late that impresing. While looking at her transcrip I realized her s.a.t was not bad it was not perdect was it wasent bad at all she could have done better in her s.a.t. in Kayla recommendation there was a good conection with her and the counselor she explained how good of a student Kayla is.

In Conclusion, I feel that the candidate that was the best and most impressive was Kayla because Roman had exellent grades and a exelent attendance but his attendance was not good and his grades were not as good as Kayla. The rest of the student had some good grades and one of them Jasmine was good at being a leader so did Roman but Jasmine and the rest of them dint had good essays and attendance. After comparing all of them I most definatly think that Kayla was the best.