Jessica+Sanchez+Admissions+Essay

===As an Admissions Officer, I Am aware of what is a priority to me in a students application. I Look for a Sharp Transcript, Followed By A Well written essay and a top - notch recommendation. After that I Like to see a what activities the student joined for their High School Years. Lastly I Look at the students SAT scores.I personally don't put much attention on the SAT scores because I think that a one day test doesn't determine a students potential all four years of high school.===

===When reviewing Roman Polanco's application the first thing that caught my attention was his upward trend on his transcript.His Grades and attendance Were Very poor in his first two years of high school but he stepped his game up in the 11th and 12th Grade.Roman's Essay Was outstanding ! The very beginning kept me wanting to read more.I was Very Impressed with the leadership and strong character Roman Posses===

===Roman participated in The Student Ambassadors for all four years of high school showing he is dedicated to one activity and stick with it.He Became an Ambassador leader his last year. Leadership is extremely important to me .Lastly, Roman's SAT score we below average in all three sections. This didn't really bother me since SAT's aren't a huge emphasis.===

===As I Was Reading Jasmine Duke's transcript, I was most impressed with her grades ,which were strong all Four Years .She's Clearly a intelligent young woman. Her Essay Was Not What I Expected To See From Her. It Didn't Answer The "Real Question".I learned more About Her Mom than Jasmine herself===

===I Loved Her Essay it had a very strong hook to it and showed how responsible and ambitious Kayla is. Kayla's essay also explained how she had several obstacles she had to face during her high school years but managed to overcome them.===

===Kaylah's activities were extremely disappointing. I understand how she faced challenges, and had to work every day during her senior year but she only attended two activities during her 4 years of High School and wasn't fully committed.=== ===Kaylah's Counselor Recommendation seemed 1OO% Honest and genuine. It explained how hard working and loyal Kaylah is. I Also Loved the fact that she challenged herself by taking several higher level courses .===

===William Santos's transcript was really poor, grade wise as well as Attendance and lateness. He started achieving acceptable grades when he reached Senior year. His SAT and Regent Scores were amazing, they were both above average and it showed how much of a strong and intelligent young man William is.===

===His Activities were not as impressing since he never really stuck to anything but, he did become the founder of the ( Inno-Zine Comic Maganize about a Super Innovator ) in the 12 Th Grade. He also had a job 11 Th-12 Th Grade. One Job was at Fanta's Hardware and AMC Movie Theater, Union Square.===

===His Essay was Horrible, It was probably done the day it was due , which was really disappointing and didn't explain anything to me about his own person .His Counselor Recommendation seemed very "faint praise" and not honest but did explain some things about William's Character.===

===I Feel Kaylah Serrano is the strongest candidate for me and is my choice.Her dedication and hard work shows what a great student she is. Her Ambition and deep commitment was extremely impressing. Her Essay was excellent. I would welcome this student to my College.===