John+Reyes Admissions+essay

As an admissions officer I ranked the TEARS RSETA I ranked it like this because I think recommendation is the most important one and then comes the SATs

(at least 20 items)
 * 1) I noticed on Roman's transcript that he had good grades.
 * 2) In the 9th grade he had 70's and I think that was good for a beginner.
 * 3) In the 10th grade he went higher with some 80's and still 70's i believe that's a improvement.
 * 4) The 11th grade he had high 80's and high 70's he's really improving a lot and I think that's going to help him get a good college.
 * 5) In the 12th grade his grades went out of the park with the 90's and very high 80's no 70's excellent work.
 * 6) In Roman's essay i believe he did an awesome Job.
 * 7) He include everything he needed to include, if i was a college admission I would pick him.
 * 8) He's activity's wasn't as good.
 * 9) he was moving to different places and also was a member in some things.
 * 10) The good thing is that he was a leader in the student ambassadors.
 * 11) I notice that Jasmine's transcript that she had good grades.
 * 12) I also noticed that she have 12 absents out of her four years in high school.
 * 13) She only have 1 lateness out of her four years and that huge.
 * 14) Jasmine passed all of her regions and also her SAT's.