anthony+centeno+admissions+essay

===I know as a admissions office its important to look at the student application to see that they have a strong transcript and a nice essay and a nice recommendation with his or her activity and good S.A.T scores and to see how the student has done for the past 4 years.=== ===When reviewing kayla serrano transcript i can say that her grades are pretty good also she has a upward trend in the 12th grade. Kayla serrano looks like she good in math because she took college class for math. I can tell that she is hard working because she miss one day of her 4 years in high school and zero lateness so for that her transcript is pretty good to me=== ===Her essay was good but to much she pass five hungered words but she answer the questions and in the essay she had some challenges one of her challenge was she did not know that much English. kayla did not have no spelling or grammar mistake and lastly she had a hook in her essay.=== ===kayla serrano she did not do that much activity she stood in jamming cares club for one year and walk her younger brother for two years and work at donkin donuts and stop at 12 grade so i think is good that she work and miss one day of her fore years of school. I like kayla recommendation it tells allot about her in class and out of class. also how she take college class for math and her recommendation is not a fain praise. kayla S.A.T scores are not bad and not good its average but her best class and high S.A.T score is math.=== ===Reviewing roman polanco essay was good he had a nice hook to it and also has a epiphany. Roman answer the question and show that he was a leader by inspiring people. his activities show that he was a leader in student ambassadorial for fore years and he work in a taco shop and has bin promoted and he has work in that taco shop for three years roman polanco S.A.T scores was not so good but took it a second time and did better then the first=== ===looking over roman polanco transcript his grade was not bad and show s a upward trend in 12 Th and 11Th all tho his lateness and absence were bad. His test were good in 80s and high 70s. recommendation was good it talks about him and was not a faint praise.=== ===When looking at William Santos transcript his grades were bad in the 60s and he has a upward trend in 12TH grade. It looks like he plays in class and good on test because his regents scores are good high 80s and low 90s. William essay is is short has a hook not even close to five hungered words. His activity's were bad but he has community home activity by taking care of his dog for 4 years. his recommendation sounds like a faint praise not that much. but looking at his S.A.T score are good high 600s the best class and test score is in history.=== ===When looking at jasmine duke transcript I got to say its good her grades are in high 80s and low 90s in all 4 years. It looks like she has test problem because her regents scores are in the high 70s and low 80S her best class looks like its history.jasmine essay is good but it dose not answer the question it mostly talks about her mom has a good hook but i will pick her mom then her form reading her essay.Her activities are good she has depth for being in the drama club for 4 years and in her church choir for 3 years and has work two jobs. her recommendation is good it tells a lot about her in class and is not a faint praise. jasmine S.A.T scores are bad but has hart buy taking it a other time=== ===In conclusion im picking jasmine duke because her grades were good for all 4 years and i know her test are not good but not bad and we can work on her test taking skill in are college. Also the college counselor tells us allot about her and how she is a good student in class and out of class. So i pick jasmine duke to be in are college.===