Tyree+Hunter+Admissions+Essay

==The Transcript component of the Tears is most important to me because its show all your work it shows your grades,attendance,upward trend. The next important thing to me is essay a very good one perfect grammar and spelling also has a good hook and a epiphany. Next on my list is recommendations so i can see what kind of student you were and find out what u do .Then activities to see if u were a leader because we love leader also if u had a job or what kind of activities u like to do .Finally is standardized test I don't really care so much about this topic because the test are bias. The Students sometime get nervous and do bad and sat's doesnt really matter==

==I'm reviewing Jasmine Duke im very impress with her grades she has very good grades she has only one lateness and 12 absences she also was very good in the activities she done she was a member she stayed with the same one too. Jasmine also has a good personal statement its not that perfect and its short. She has a perfect recommendation it not just what she does but what it say about her .Her sat's are below average but i don't really care about her sat's because she could of been nervous.==

==i'm reviewing Kayla Serrano i'm impressed with her transcript especially her lateness's and absents she has no lateness's and only one absent but her grade are not great there OK but not great.Her sat's are not great neither she scored below average on her critical reading, over average on her math then under average on her writing. Her activities are horrible she was in a activity for only one year in ninth grade but she worked 20 hrs in 12 grade in dunking donuts as a counter server. Her personal statement is excellent it tells who she is and what she does its not at all a spaghetti essay. Her recomendation is great too she has a lot of compliments it also has her strength and weaknesses==