tijon+damons admission essay

As an admissions officer i ranked the tears with a 4 out 5 and is an excellent way of grading papers for admissions. the very first thing i look for is the transcripts because grades are very important to a schools well being especially math ela social studies and science grades under an 80 gives doubts. the second thing i look for is sat's. SAT's are very important because its shows how well are you able to perform when a challenge is handed to you when asked for. third thing essays who are you. essay are important because they share a pice of your life and who you are. How do you perform. recommendations are vital we want to know what kind of student you are and if your focus and detected person. activities are a good way of show a person is active and likes to participate.

1. Roman palanco in the begin of the year roman polanco was scoring very low grades. every class for the begin of 9th grade his grade were was mid 70s to 65. during the 10th grade his grades went to scoring all in the 70s a big improvement from his last grades. on to the 11 grade his grades went from avaege to b- and scoreing from mid 70s to high 80s. during his last year of high school amazingly goin from low 60s to a score of 90s a truly an amazing uptrend.

William Santos started as a student that does very poorly in school and happened to make a sudden uptrend during the end of his high school year. first grades he revived during his first term his grades were low 60s and 70. next year score around the same amount. during his third year his was able to raise his grades in three classes. in his last year he made a big uptrend