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Nelson Suarez 903 Admissions Essay

The transcript component of the tears is most important to me because it shows many things.For example it shows your grades,attendance,standardized test,and your S.A.T'S.Next important thing to me is the essay because it tells you somewhat about you and why you should be picked in their college.Next i think recommendations are important because it tells how you act in school and what type of student you are,if your a sporting student helping out or a well acting student.After the recommendation i think that that the activities are important because it shows what you plan on doing at the college,if you want to play a sport in the college.Or what profession you want to do.Lastly i think that the S.A.T'S are the least important thing to worry about because i think that its bias.What if your language wasn't english and it was something else?It would be fair because you wouldn't get the same grade as a student that speaks clear english.

In reviewing Jasmine Dukes transcript i was most impressed with how she had very good grades and was late one time in four years and and absent twelve times in four years.The essay part was NOT GOOD but other than that everything else was good.I really liked how jasmine duke devoted her self to school and tried her hardest not to be late much or absent.I think that if jasmine dukes essay was better and she took her time with it then she probably would of gotten into the college no questions asked.It looked like she did it a period before it was due.Jasmine could do it but she rushed and it might of caused her a spot in the college she really wanted to go to.

While reviewing William santos whole transcript i was shocked that he even applied to college or wanted to go to college because for one his grades were barely passing and two his essay was atrocious.I know that he could do it because in his S.A.T'S and is state test were good he just didn't try because he felt like he was reviewing the same thing every day.That doesn't give him excuse to not try because if it was review everyday you should be getting 100s each test or class work.I think you should always try your best no matter what your doing.You never know what could happen with your educational grades or even your academic play.He just didn't try and he might suffer in the end.

While looking at Kaylah Serrano's transcript i was most amazed with her attendance and lateness never late and almost never absent astonishing.So far out of all the candidates Kaylah had the best essay with a great hook.Her grades weren't perfect they were in the 80's and 90' but she passed and she tried her hardest to come to school ever day.For a student that's first language is Spanish and not English she did pretty well on the S.A.T'S.She probably would of got accepted to the college first choice with out a dout because she tried her hardest came to school ever day and had a good transcript.

Reviewing roman polanco's transcript i saw that he is a bright young student that did well in school but was late and absent to many times each year.His grades were a little scratchy the first two years but the last two years were good.His S.A.T'S and test were good but i still think the attendance record would affect him in the long run.The essay was good it had a good hook and was long not one paragraph like jasmine and William.

Now that i have read all four students transcripts and compared them i think that i would of choose Kaylah Serrano to be part of my college.I feel that she did well with her whole transcript especially for a student that's second language is English and not her first.Each candidate was well in there own way but im staying with Kaylah as my number one choice.