Jasmine+Turbi+Admissions+Essay

====In reviewing Roman Polanco's application,on his transcript I saw that he is improving in his classes.he also upward trend 60s and 70s in 9th grade. Romans lateness was a big issue in 9th grade about 45 times.his math testes are better than his math classes. on Romans essay he talks about himself and it has hook,epiphany and specific examples.his essay has grammar and spelling very good,not perfect but good and its definitely not a spaghetti sauce essay because he took his time.Romans activities shows that he is a leader for the clubs/programs.one of them was the debate club which he started in the 10th grade and he joined innovations cares club in the 11th grade.lastly for student ambassadors for all four years it showed depth.romans recommendations show that he participates in class and contributes to class discussions,he is a reliable caring and a leader.the last T.E.A.R.S is S.A.Ts which is slightly below average for Critical Reading and slightly above average in Math and Writing.====

One thing I was most impressed in Kayla Serrano T.E.A.R.S was her Transcript because she has excellent attendance
her scores are good but not great ,Global, English and science are her weaknesses, Spanish and math are her strength.Her essay has not so good spelling grammar and specific examples.next for T.E.A.R.S is activities ,she was a member in the jamming cares club and she worked as the counter service at Dunk'in donuts.Her recommendations show that she scored an excellent grade on her Math and Spanish .On her S.A.Ts she had very low scores on her three of her sections,Critical Reading,Math and Writing.

One thing I disliked how William Santos Transcript was not good ,his grades was not so good,he has poor attendance and lateness.she has no challenging classes and above average regents scores.On his essay I didn't answer the real question and he didnt include a hook,epiphany and no specific examples.next williams activites shows he is a leader which is good and he attended programs in the 9th grade it was drama, film appreciation in the 11th grade and comic book club in the 12th grade. his recommendations shows that hes a bright man which is a faint praise.he has good S.A.Ts scores and his sections are some what above.

While looking at Jasmine Duke's Transcript I was surprised on her grades and absences for 9th,10th,11th and 12th grade because he grades were really good and she was only absent or late for 10th grade.For her essay she didn't not answer the real question and doesnt have a hook, epiphany and specific details. looking at her activities I saw she attended a program for all of her 4 grades and she is a good leader and a captain.Jasmines recommendations shows that she a good student and is hard-working.She comes to school everyday which show she has good grades and is a captain for the step program.Lastly the scores on her S.A.Ts are good for three of her sections but not great.

After comparing all of the candidates I think Jasmine Duke T.E.A.R.S are interesting,her Transcript, activities,recommendations.Excepted for her Essay and S.A.Ts are really good because of her grades,her absences and lateness is good. Hearing she attended a bunch